"This is a great modern spoof on all the old fashioned parent's of the baby boomer generation. Your telephone conversation seems spot on. The snap shot of the brother's life seems dead on too." - A. Baptista
"A fine job of depicting a young woman taking
pleasure not only in her life and the new rules she's created for
herself, but in rebelling against the old rules and what is expected of
her. What makes this work so well is the "ordinariness" of the young
woman. I think your readers, men and women alike, can easily identify
with her." - W. Shear