"I thought this was just terrific." - Peggy V
"Good one. I believe this is happening. Although I spend little time hanging out in ladies rooms, I believe this is what it's like in there." - W. Shear
"Love the title! What is it about public bathrooms that turn all of us into eavesdroppers? I liked the story all the way through, but there was one phrase I really loved: 'And I'd wasted enough time strolling down a litter-strewn memory lane.' Nice work! - M. Klein
"You did a remarkable job flipping back and forth between the two women’s conversations and the thoughts of the narrator, right down to the perfect use of single and double quotes. This whole story was very nicely done." - K. Klein