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Writing Feedback - Different Eyes
Very nice, Kristy. Very touching and well
written. - Anita S.
Congratulations, Kristy, on the publication of your flash nonfiction,
"Different Eyes." Also, a big congrats for all of your other publication
successes that you mentioned in your interview. The story is great,
although sobering. Yes, it captures that moment when innocence is lost.
I think we all go through it. Looking forward to reading more of your
published work. - T. Tu
Beautiful, Kristy, and it hit home. My family experienced a similar
thing. - J. Kwon
As someone who has a physical difference (born with only one arm), this
story spoke me. I, too, wanted to be like the other kids, able to do
what they could do. The realization that I was “different” was not easy
to understand when I was young. Great job portraying that notion from
the perspective of a child. :) Thanks for sharing! - S. Simon
Congratulations on your success. Your essay had some really strong
descriptive language. - A. Troya-Whyte
Good one, Kristy. - J. Weston
This one deserves publication. Congratulations. - W. Shear
