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Writing Feedback - Grease Frightening
"Lots of great detail here that makes this account come to life. As much as the introduction had my mouth watering, the 'ghost of everything fried' that 'emanated from its clogged pores' turned my appetite. The parallel relationship with Brogan made this more than just another 'looked better in the ad' thing. The way you did more showing than telling made this piece really work. Good one." - J. Gatson
"Well done. This sounds authentic and would resonate with anyone who's ever had to clean up after a meal. Speaking of meals, your description of those pork chops have gotten me hungry." - W. Shear
