"A well written account of humanity in the face of a natural disaster. Although Cecil s life is shattered by a storm, he saves his child's toy. The image of him carrying that plastic bag filled with the few things he could salvage from his life, fighting the storm as he trudges forward to his family will stay with me." - W. Shear
"The description of the hurricane was excellent. I could just see the winds and the rain ripping apart everything. Also you showed the fortitude of the people. They will rebuild and start all over. They were good with each other and will support each other through the hard times ahead. Good story." - M. Coolick
I just commented on your story at the 101 Words
site saying how I admire your ability to say so much in so few words. I
didn’t realize it was your first attempt at writing something so short!
Good job! It’s very powerful! The intense imagery pulled me in. - S.
Simon
Congratulations, Kristy-certainly appropriate given the terrible
flooding in the midwest. - J. Kwong
Congratulations! I really liked it! - L. Brody
Reads like a prayer. - Dante Murray
This is lovely and well done. - Benita Wiggins
Great story. Well Done. - Swarn Gill
Nice and concise view into the aftermath. - Rick Belina