"You write very well. The dialogue sounds real and the story is easy to follow." - W. Shear
"I like the realistic dialogue between two people
trying to work out their new relationship.
I hear Kristen's confusion and Adam's confidence." - K. Highgrove
"I liked the conversation between her and Adam -
can feel the annoyance and exasperation in
her voice. I think Adam is quite strong in his thinking and would be
good for her if she'd
give him the chance." - E. Ellis