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Caught in the Act - Coup de Gras

Sixteen break-ins in eighteen years and not once had a damned witness come forward. And now Howard listened to a stick-thin vagrant, nicknamed Magga, describe how “about ten big, stinkin’ niggers” had wrenched wrought-iron gates from their concrete moorings, smashed through Howard’s glass storefront and cleaned out his merchandise.

So much for the 6PM curfew and Abu Bakr’s order for looters to desist, Howard fumed, glaring at men toting pilfered refrigerators and mattresses on their backs through streets strewn with broken glass. He could thank God his store hadn’t gone up in flames like those in Port of Spain but, when Abu Bakr and his Muslimeen had stormed Parliament five days ago, they’d overthrown the government in the name of Allah.

God obviously had other priorities in Trinidad on July 27, 1990.

Kicking aside debris, Howard stopped short as he entered his store, not because the clothing, jewelery, accessories and toys he had struggled to protect from thieves during Christmas and all the long weekends in between were gone. No, that he was sadly used to. One Christmas Eve, he had carted his entire inventory home just to have it stolen at gunpoint when the store reopened on Boxing Day.

What stopped him now was the missing shelves, rolling racks and glass cases. The space was completely bare. Even the blonde mannequin had been taken. A gush of water drew him further in, past dressing rooms stripped of curtains and mirrors. The door to the bathroom was missing and a geyser of water plumed where the toilet had been.

A chocolate marshmallow of a man, shiny with sweat from his labour, turned from detaching the porcelain sink from the wall. His gummy, gap-toothed grin quivered with regret.

“Sorry, boss,” he sighed as he hefted the sink. “Nuttin’ else left to take.”

Howard took extreme pleasure in ramming his fist into the man’s face.

 

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